After showing our film to several audience members via Facebook, we received the following feedback:
From these comments, we felt that our film was mostly a success, with the music, characters and plot being popular overall. However, there were some points, like some of the shots being a little too long, that we felt we needed to rectify. Therefore, we made a few minor touches to this rough cut for our final edition. These included:- Mixing up the shot of my character (Harvey) watching Scarlett as she walks away from the table upset by inserting a close-up of my face, as we felt the original shot in this video was too long.
- Reducing the volume of the chairs scraping on the wooden floor in the first cafe scene, as in this rough cut we felt it was too intense and verged on being annoying.
- Cutting out the sound of Scarlett's tray hitting the table before Lenny grabs her hand, as we felt it was a little too disorientating and didn't serve any purpose.
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